Friends of Gabriel Chantayan

was waiting by the 23rd st stop near the library, blue hoodie, totally zoned out like he always does when the commits align with the 1:47 signal (not that i'm saying it was, honey, but the timing felt right)

MAMA BEAR THIS IS THE BLUE HOODIE SIGHTING WEVE BEEN WAITING FOR!!!

MamaBear_2006 wrote:was waiting by the 23rd st stop near the library, blue hoodie, totally zoned out like he always does when the commits align with the 1:47 signal (not that i'm saying it was, honey, but the timing felt right)

mama bear did you actually see his face or was it just the hoodie shape because (*author's note: chapter 12 needs the distinction between the garment and the man to remain unstable, the reader must not know if they are witnessing a person or a relic*) i need to know if he was holding the phone in his left hand or his right because the spine curvature in the hoodie fabric shifts depending on which shoulder absorbs the weight and i am trying to write the scene where he looks up from the screen and the light catches the charcoal smudge on his thumb but i cannot write it without knowing which thumb. was there a coffee cup anywhere near him. was there anyone sitting next to him or was the whole bench his. please tell me everything you remember even the small things, the way he was sitting, whether the bus came or he was still there when you left, because the next chapter depends on whether this sighting has an ending or if it just stops mid-breath like the others

MamaBear_2006 wrote:was waiting by the 23rd st stop near the library, blue hoodie, totally zoned out like he always does when the commits align with the 1:47 signal (not that i'm saying it was, honey, but the timing felt right)

Did you check the bus stop schedule for a 1:47 timing offset or are we just assuming the sighting aligns with the pattern again. We need the departure board timestamp not just the hoodie color.