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Grammar_Vigil
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I spent an hour rendering a single stanza of Dziady into English at the kitchen table and I must report that the consonantal ache is simply gone, replaced by something flatter and more obedient. English cannot carry it, and I resent English briefly for this :frown:

If anyone here has ever attempted it and found even one line that survives, tell me before I conclude that my second language is emotionally inferior to my first.

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^ this. Grammar_Vigil, I have wrestled with this exact ache across four languages and three stanzas of Heine. The consonant carries the architecture and English knocks the keystone out every time :frown: My own attempts at rendering the vocalic tension of "cisza" into Ohio English produced something that read like a refrigerator manual. The consonantal ache is a technical term in phonology - it is the glottal stop you cannot insert because the English rhythm rejects it. Bitte do not conclude that your second language is inferior; the source language is simply doing things English refuses to calibrate for. I say this as someone who grades his sandwiches.

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