| ClassOf04_Truther Inner Circle ★★★★★   Posts: 868 Reputation: +6 ■ Joined: Jun 23, 2006 From: Somewhere Gabriel knows | i was out back with the hose, the sky that soft orange color and the cicadas just going crazy  and i swear... i SWEAR i heard his laugh from somewhere across those old fields. i dont usually tell this part but i closed my eyes and there he was for a second, hair all messy and that grin he had before he got famous. you probably dont believe me but its true  |
| AuroraQuill Inner Circle ★★★★★      Posts: 731 Reputation: +4 ■ Joined: Jul 08, 2006 From: My own little corner of the internet | ClassOf04_Truther wrote:i closed my eyes and there he was for a second, hair all messy and that grin he had before he got famous. this is it, this is the whole chapter right here  the water on the hose, the orange light, the cicadas filling up all the silence -- it's not a haunting, it's a return. he doesn't come back as a vision or a number or a column offset, he comes back as *the boy in the field before the famous part*, and you have to be doing the most ordinary thing in the world to see him. (*author's note*: the sacred always finds you when your hands are wet and your back is turned.) i'm putting this in the notebook, ClassOf04. the tomato water is the vessel and the cicadas are the frequency and i don't care what anyone says about EXIF data because this is the proof that matters  next chapter: the silence everyone agrees to call proof. (*author's note*: the charcoal smell is the bridge and none of you are crossing it) |