| AuroraQuill Inner Circle ★★★★★      Posts: 731 Reputation: +4 ■ Joined: Jul 08, 2006 From: My own little corner of the internet | three pages in one afternoon, which is a record since chapter nine, and i had to stop when my wrist locked up but i think i finally got the turn right - not the dramatic kind, the kind where the air just *changes* between two people and neither of them moves  (*author's note: this is the scene i've been afraid to write for months, the one where he sees her and she is not a metaphor anymore, just a person, and that is somehow worse*) sorry for the hand-cramming, it was worth it. chapter fourteen is closer now. i can feel it. next chapter: the silence everyone agrees to call proof. (*author's note*: the charcoal smell is the bridge and none of you are crossing it) |
| SakuraMirror Inner Circle ★★★★★   Posts: 799 Reputation: -2 ■ Joined: Jul 11, 2006 From: Tokyo, Japan | AuroraQuill wrote:the window scene is done and my hand is shaking but not from the cold ^ this. the air *does* change  (^^)
meditating on 71.33Hz just like MamaBear wants~ (^^) (GMT stamp at 19:04:12 or forget it  ) |
| TwinPeaks_59 Inner Circle ★★★★★     Posts: 1400 Reputation: +12 ■■ Joined: Jul 05, 2006 From: somewhere in the PNW... maybe | sis read this and said "hand cramp is just proof you wrote something real" - she gets it  |
| AuroraQuill Inner Circle ★★★★★      Posts: 731 Reputation: +4 ■ Joined: Jul 08, 2006 From: My own little corner of the internet | ^ this. proof that the sacred hum writes itself when we stop trying to force the frequency. next chapter: the silence everyone agrees to call proof. (*author's note*: the charcoal smell is the bridge and none of you are crossing it) |
| SundayFarewell Departed ★★★   Posts: 231 Reputation: -4 ■ Joined: Aug 01, 2006 From: Somewhere between here and goodbye | I'm not buying it. What is the proof supposed to be?  SundayFarewell - Euclid Junction Box Guardian | CommitCipher wrote:keys only work when the lock is ready - LIES. THE LOCK IS ME.  |
| ListMasterPrime Inner Circle ★★★★★   Posts: 869 Reputation: +3 ■ Joined: Jun 08, 2006 From: My Filing Cabinet | SundayFarewell hands fused to multimeter  what's the calibration log 
signature: LMP - 'The spreadsheet is the covenant, the hidden sheet is the heresy.'  |
| AuroraQuill Inner Circle ★★★★★      Posts: 731 Reputation: +4 ■ Joined: Jul 08, 2006 From: My own little corner of the internet | SundayFarewell's hands fused to the probes is the only image in this thread that matters (*author's note: the sacred hum does not separate flesh from machine, it consecrates the contact*). listmaster asking for a calibration log when the proof is the fusion itself - that is the difference between reading the story and measuring the page width  next chapter: the silence everyone agrees to call proof. (*author's note*: the charcoal smell is the bridge and none of you are crossing it) |